This is a cute little poem that I wrote for a guyfriend of mine about a year ago. Ahh I'm such a dork. I use to bake this kid cookies all the time. Anway, I really don't write poetry, but sometimes I just take a stab at it. Well, enjoy!"Remember Me"
Just Remember when the sun shines,
Just Remember when those tears fall
I will comfort you.
Just remember that I care about you.
And when you see that special girl
In that old photo album of yours
Torn and crinkled
When your life is tangled in a nightmare
Just Remember that someone else feels your pain.
Just remember me.
Blah sorry for the small print. :/
Yeah, yeah I had a crush on him when I wrote this. :)
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Wowzerz, thats pree snazzy poem. I have made a LOT of poems. I don't consider myself a writer but yes I have made some poems off the top of my head. It was awesome. PS I used to have the hugest crush on this dweeb and I look back and im kinda embarrassed. lol
wow, tahts pretty good, id have never thought of anything like that to write
i wish i could find my thinggy so i could put my pics on the computer, this is driving me crazy
woops look who cant spell that lmao
all you need is a guitar and thats a hit! it seems like it would be a lovely song.
That's very pretty, you should try poems more often.
I love poems! However, I still prefer lyrics? Hmmm
That was really good :) I made a great poem when I was liking a guy too! Hmm, love must bring out the best in people (artistically speaking).
And I just went through your iPod player and found "Shut Up and Let Me Go", yayyy! I ♥ The Ting Tings & most English bands :D
peace&love
nicole.
That is such a sweet poem!!!
Krosemarie
That is really buetiful!
You should try poems more often just like everyone else is saying.
Steph
That's a really great poem! You should really write more... but what I'm really curious about is, did you give the boy your poem? And what did he say? =] I'm sure he loved it!
lmao, the rest kinda suck
Thanks for the comment-it was really sweet.
I love the poem you wrote by the way and I love picture of the cookies-Yum:-) lol
~Kristin
funny.. i thought you said you don't write poems.. guess i must be tired cause i could have sworn i just read a poem written by you. Don't be so hard on yourself. You have a gift of writing. You have a voice. Realize that you can't start out on top. You have to work at it to get better. But more importantly you have to let God work through you. And by the way yes what you read on my blog was writtn by me. Everything you read on my blog will be written by me. Its taken me four years to start writing stuff i'm really proud of. Keep writing. Eventually the words will come. If you'd like any help don't hesitate to ask.
God Bless
Mauk
What a sweet poem! You're pretty talented (:
And I love that picture with the cookies. It's so cute!
that picture with the cookies is SO adorable! & the poem was really cute...you're pretty amazing at poetry for not doing it often
Awww, what a cute poem. Let's hear another one. (For lack of a better term.)
Yeah your right I have never desired popularity either.
I just thought it would be different, interesting and fun to post, you know on how to be popular.
But I totally agree with you that I have never desired popularity. I'm just not... that type of person.
Steph
Very sweet poem.The cookies made me hungry.Last year I had a time I baked tons of cookies too.
u right just awesome !!!!!!!!
love the poem!♥♥☺
i like this poem alot!! you should do more poetry!
hahaha you baked him cookies? I made my crush brownies, back in the day... ;)
cute pic of the cookies, btw.
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